Kimmi

Full Name: Kimmatha Sato & Kimmi
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Element: Fire
Birthplace: Flame village
Position: Assassin


Personality: She is very serious and keeps her eyes on the prize. When she meets new people she is kind of shy until she gets to know them better. Kimmatha is not the one to double cross she will stay loyalty you, if you deserve it. She loves to be leader and is very smart. She never enters an area without knowing background information. She is great with disguises, she make herself look like a whole different person. She is known to have a quick temper which drives people off.

Abilities: She is great at tracking and hunting. She is a great swordsman and is never too far from her dagger and sword. She is great at hiding and disappearing without a trace. She is a great fire-bender. Her fire-bending abilities are limited because of her crimes against the Fire Nation and not wanting to be discovered.
Appearance: Long Black and brown hair (back length).Grey & red eyes, skinny and tall. Serious (her facial expression)
Height: 5'4
Weight: 109lb
Eyes: red & Gray
Hair: Black & brown

She keeps her hair in two buns in the back of her hair with some flowing to the back and a bang in the front. .She has a burn mark going down the left side of her body starting at her elbow and several bruises on her face. Her outfit consists of a black jumpsuit like outfit with a red belt that holds her dagger set latched to it. Black boots that run up to the knee and two retractable blades latched to her back.

Weaponry & Other Gear:
Whip hidden within her nap-snack and dragon necklace hanging from her belt.

History: Kimmatha was born second to two sisters. By time she was six she was a great fire-bender. When she turned eight her village was ambushed Killing her mother and sister taking their father as prisoner. She was left burned and bruised. Kimmi and her sister, Yumi, set off to find the ambushers and to find out what happened to their father. After three years of tracking and searching the finally caught up with the ambushers they never found their father. In rage Kimmi ransacked the base leaving no witnesses. After that Yumi and Kimmi agreed to go their separate ways. Kimmatha fled to Shu Jing in search of a sword master. She met a boy the name of Ken, master swordsman. Her and Ken became great friends, she trained fire-bending and mastered the sword. By the time she was sixteen she was great swordsman and left Shu Jing. Before she left she told Ken that she would return to Shu Jing

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