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PostSubject: Seiko Yuki's Bio   Seiko Yuki's Bio EmptyMon Feb 25, 2013 5:22 pm

Full Name: Seiko Yuki
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Element: Water
Birthplace: Outskirts of the Fire Nation Capital
Position: Wander
Training: Beginner self-taught water bender, intermediate archer and expert katana wielder

Personality:
Seiko is a quiet girl with almost no anger and no sadness in her. On the other hand, any other emotions, such as excitement and nervousness, will show through strongly when they come into play. She can easily see others feelings but has difficulty speaking to others and will often mumble or stutter when a stranger walks up to her and starts talking to her.

Abilities:
Throughout her life, Seiko has been a wonderful swords woman but her water bending is poor. Her emotions will also get the better of her when she feels useless or someone excites her. In fights, she can retaliate just enough to avoid injuries, fight with enough power and control to overpower the other fighter, or she could avoid attacks just to avoid a fatal wound. It all depends on the skill of the opposing fighter.

Appearance:
Height: 5'10"
Weight: Very skinny about 120 lbs.
Eyes: Dark blue-ish grey
Hair: Brown that looks black
Skin: Pale originally but now a thick tan

Although she lives on the road, she takes care of herself well and rarely gets sick. Her hair is cut short and choppy from cutting it with her katana on the road and can’t fit into a ponytail. On her arm she has a burn curling up to her shoulder from an incident with her father that has faded but not very much. Her clothes are generally a pair of pants, shirt, and jacket but occasionally she will wear things that are more extravagant. Her accessories include her black boots, a small phoenix charm on a long thick thread that she keeps tucked under her shirt, and a decorated bracelet from a friend that she met on her journey.

Weaponry & Other Gear: (Omit this field if no such items)

Katana
Materials: Wood, steel
Description: A high quality weapon that has hope written on the blade in kanji.
Hunting Bow
Materials: Wood, thread
Description: Best used for hunting but can be used for distant attacks. Helps catch food in the wild.
Dagger x3
Materials: Wood, steel
Description: Hidden in various places for easy access when fighting or skinning a caught animal.

Bottle of water
Materials: Clay bottle, water
Description: Used for fights if she needs to but not typically.


History:
Seiko Yuki was born to a hunter and a retired captain of the fire nation. Soon after her birth, Seiko’s mother died of a sickness and her father in withdrawal decided to teach his daughter how to defend herself. He was a master and taught her but he would lash out when she messed up. She learned much but rarely spoke out against him unlike many other children her age. When she was 9, she water bended for the first time by accident. Seiko kept it a secret because she lived in a home that would rather through her out then keep a “useless girl that could only splash around” as her father put it. On Seiko’s 11th birthday, her father, while drunk, used a fire lasso to burn her right shoulder severely. All for preventing the sake that he threw at her mother’s memorial from reaching its destination. In a moment of rage she lashed out and distracted him long enough to grab a dagger and a katana before running out of the house.
To survive, she used her skills to hunt then sold the meat and skins in nearby towns. She bought a bow and arrows and quickly learned how to shoot the right places in animals to kill with as little pain as possible. Practicing bending and retaining her skills as a swords woman, she went along never staying in one place for long. Rumors started as she became better and trouble seemed to follow her, it wasn’t long before a bounty was placed on her in the fire nation for falsely accused crimes. Now she has begun traveling through the earth kingdom.
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Posts : 272
EXP : 4905
Join date : 2012-10-23

Character Description
Age: 45
Position: Ex-Spymaster
Nation: Fire Nation

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PostSubject: Re: Seiko Yuki's Bio   Seiko Yuki's Bio EmptyMon Feb 25, 2013 5:45 pm

Sadly, you're under the limit regarding the amount of words required for an expert tier character in your personality, appearance, abilities and history sections. Your character, Seiko is an expert with a katana. This means that your app must use the expert tier template.

Anyway, for now you're denied due to the reason I just stated. Of course, we never perma-deny someone, if you edit your character to suit our requirements, and bump the thread so we know you've done it then we'll look at it again. There are also a few grammatical errors in there, so if you do choose to edit your app then i'd advise you re-read it and see what you can find.

As a final note, the '-Kun' part of your username should be removed, as it isn't part of her actual name.

As an even more final note, feel free to drop in the chatbox at any time, it's sitting there at the top of the homepage, in case you didn't know.

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Posts : 667
EXP : 5815
Join date : 2011-08-21

Character Description
Age: 22
Position: Thief
Nation: Air Temples

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PostSubject: Re: Seiko Yuki's Bio   Seiko Yuki's Bio EmptySun Jul 07, 2013 4:27 pm

Moved to rejected due to inactivity.
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