Hyperion and Rin

Full name: Hyperion Yuhano Nagakashi
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Element: Unknown
Allignment: Neutral
Birthplace: Gaoling
Position: Unknown
Training: Meditation
Companion: A male dragon, Tal Vu Iing, and his girlfriend, Rin Yuuki

Personality:
Feirce, Guardian, Smart, Loyal

Abilities:
Stealth, Telekinesis, Charm, Super-Human Speed and Strength, Flight, Flexibility, Parkour

Appearance:
Height: 5'6.5"
Weight: 125 lbs
Eyes: Red
Hair: Cornrows, left side white, right side black
Skin: Light skinned
Build: Toned muscle
Clothes: Red jacket, ends at shins, "000" on each shoulder. Blact t shirt and pants. White shoes.
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Full name: Rin Rosalina Yuuki
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Element: Earth/Fire
Allignment: Good
Birthplace: Gaoling
Position: Traveling with Hyperion
Training: Master Bender
Companion: A female dragon, Kira Tu Sol, and her boyfriend, Hyperion Nagakashi

Personality:
Kind, Smart, Loyal, Will only fight if she needs to

Abilities:
Persuasion, Earth/Metal/Sand/Crystal Bending, Fire/Lightning Bending

Appearance:
Height: 5'1"
Weight: 81 lbs
Eyes: SkyBlue
Hair: Brown with blonde streaks, ends at her waist
Skin: Light
Figure: Slim, Curvy
Clothes: Black Vest over White Tank Top With Black skirt

Weapon:
Dagger in her belt

You may want to read the character template. It helps.

https://lastairbender.rpg-board.net/t1426-character-templates

in which Zul becomes something of a wet blanket.

so for one, Kei is right about the character templates, but for two, I will give you the benefit of the doubt since you're new and all, but this is ATLA, not a superhero RP.Thus, over-the-top abilities such as Telekinesis, Charm, Super-Human Speed and Strength, & Flight are a bit out of range. Similarly, there are no "multi-benders" except the avatar. you either bend 1 element, or you bend none.

similarly, dragons have been all but extinct, and I don't think they've suddenly made a comeback to be common enough that little kids can have their own personal dragon, so that is also something to think about... which of course leads us to the fact that even if their unrealistic abilities *were* feasible, the chances of kids their age being experts and masters is just absurd and unreal. Also, there's no need for unusual/unnatural hair/eye colors. it's not as cool as people think.

so I hate to say this, but these will basically need a complete do-over to make them fit more in with what could be considered realistic. ALSO, next time please use the appropriate templates, found here. https://lastairbender.rpg-board.net/t1426-character-templates

if you have any questions or comments, please PM me.
~Zuzu~

Full name: Rin Rosalina Yuuki
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Element: Earth/Fire
Alignment: Good
Birthplace: Gaoling
Position: Traveling with Hyperion
Training: Earth Bending [Intermediate] Sand Bending [Beginner] Hand-to-Hand [Intermediate] Combat Knife [Beginner]
Companion: A female Wolf, Kira Tu Sol, and her boyfriend, Hyperion Nagakashi

Personality:
Kind- Even if you're her enemy and she knows it, she'll never kill or seriously injure you.
Smart- She has learned from the elders of the Earth Kingdom and read many scrolls that help her in her bending.
Loyal- If she has a friend, she will do anything to stick with him/her.
Shy- She prefers to only talk to and stay with Hyperion.

Abilities:
Persuasion- During her travels with Hyperion, she picked up on persuasion from the Sand Benders. Earth/Sand Bending- Her father is an earth bender, and she has been in the Si Wong Desert for two years now.
Knife Fighting- She has just recently bought her knife from a Desert Merchant, so her skills could use some work.

Appearance:
Height: 5'1"
Weight: 81 lbs
Eyes: Sky-Blue
Hair: Brown with blonde streaks, ends at her waist
Skin: Light
Clothes: Black Vest over Red Tank Top With Red skirt, Black shin socks and Red shoes.

Weaponry and other gear.
Item Name:Combat Knife
Materials: Diamond
Description: Near unbreakable blade, can be thrown.
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Full name: Hyperion Yuhano Nagakashi
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Element: Earth
Alignment: Neutral
Birthplace: Gaoling
Position: Traveling through the Si Wong Desert
Training: "Free Running" [Expert] Earth Bending [Expert] Sand Bending [Intermediate] Hand-to-Hand [Intermediate]
Companion: A male wolf, Tal Vu Iing, and his girlfriend, Rin Yuuki

Personality:
Fierce- He loves to fight and will do so every chance he gets.
Guardian- He will do everything in his power to protect Rin.
Smart- He doesn't read much as he considers it "boring" but he does like to learn hands-on.
Loyal- If you want to join him he won't leave your side... unless you try to hurt Rin.

Abilities:
Earth/Sand Bending- Both his parents are master benders, and he trains with the Sand Benders.
Free Running- He has always been extremely athletic and he loves to climb, do flips, etc.

Appearance:
Height: 5'6.5"
Weight: 125 lbs
Eyes: Red
Hair: Cornrows, left side white, right side black
Skin: Light skinned
Clothes: Red jacket, ends at shins, "000" on each shoulder. Black t shirt and pants. Black shoes.

I don't think you quite understand

REJECTED!

you have ignored three different times when people told you to use the TEMPLATES. Until you can understand that you need to use those, I hate to break it to you, kiddo, but you ain't goin' anywhere.

Full Name: Hyperion Yuhano Nagakashi

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Element: Earth

Birthplace: Gaoling

Position: Member of Sandbender tribe

Training: Earthbending [Beginner] Sandbending [Intermediate] Hand to Hand [Intermediate]

Personality: Fierce- He loves to fight and will do so every chance he gets.
Guardian- He will do everything in his power to protect Rin.
Smart- He doesn't read much as he considers it "boring" but he does like to learn hands-on.
Loyal- If you want to join him he won't leave your side... unless you try to hurt Rin.
Cocky- He loves fighting, and will do it every chance he gets. He presumes that he will be the victor of every fight he gets into.
Destructive- When fighting he will often attempt to destroy everything in his path to take down his opponent.
Childish- He is only motivated by consequences, not by the motive, spirit, or principle of a thing. He refuses to get help, and refuses to change his behavior, until someone else threatens him with consequences. He’ll change when he’s in the trouble, not because he wants to make others happy, but because he wants out of trouble.
Stubborn- He cannot be reasoned with.

Abilities: Sandbending- Hyperion has trained with Sandbenders for 3 years now, at first he learned fairly fast but his learning pace slowed because he is extremely stubborn.
Earthbending- He picked up on Earthbending from his mother, Rosalina, but never got any real practice.
Hand to Hand- He first started fighting to impress Rin. He has been training and sparing with fellow sandbender, Ghashiun.
Free Running- He has always been extremely athletic and he loves to climb, do flips, etc.
Flight- Using the sand, he can lift himself into air for a short period of time.

Height: 5'6.5"
Weight:112 lbs
Eyes/Iris: Red
Hair: Black and White
Skin: Apricot(Peach)

Description: Hyperion wears a red jacket with the number "000" on both shoulders, his jacket ends at his shins. Underneath his jacket he has a black shirt and black pants, he wears black shoes and black fingerless gloves. Hyperion is often seen, with a vase of sand strapped to his back, hovering slightly above the ground using sandbending to hold him up (unless he's free running or just hanging out with Rin).

History:
Hyperion was born into a high/middle class family in Gaoling, Earth kingdom. He had a difficult relationship with his father who wouldn't bother to teach him anything and eventually left Gaoling and went to the Fire nation. Hyperion picked up earthbending from his mother, one day Hyperion's mother Rosalina was practicing earthbending in their home courtyard. Hyperion walked into the courtyard to see her practicing, he later tried it himself and found that he too could earthbend.
At the age of 11, Hyperion set out to learn bending elsewhere because he was too stubborn to let his mother train him. He was headed to the Si Wong Desert, on his way there he met Rin. Hyperion didn't know at the time (and still doesn't) that Rin is his half sister. Hyperion convinced her to come learn earthbending with him, when they arrived in the Si Wong they met Sha-Mo, who offered to teach them sandbending. During their first training session, it was discovered that Rin was a Fire bender, not an earthbender. When Hyperion turned 13, him and Rin traveled to Ba Sing Se where they are now.

This is better, I'm just gonna put logic into this but you'll need a history to better explain how he somehow knows Sandbending at intermediate level which is a sub bending of Earth which he's only a beginner at

I didn't notice my Earthbending was at beginner, sorry.

Considering the age anything between Beginner and intermediate

Full Name: Hyperion Yuhano Nagakashi

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Element: Earth

Birthplace: Gaoling

Position: Member of Sandbender tribe

Training: Earthbending [Intermediate] Sandbending [Intermediate] Hand to Hand [Intermediate]

Personality: Fierce- He loves to fight and will do so every chance he gets.
Guardian- He will do everything in his power to protect Rin.
Smart- He doesn't read much as he considers it "boring" but he does like to learn hands-on.
Loyal- If you want to join him he won't leave your side... unless you try to hurt Rin.
Cocky- He loves fighting, and will do it every chance he gets. He presumes that he will be the victor of every fight he gets into.
Destructive- When fighting he will often attempt to destroy everything in his path to take down his opponent.
Childish- He is only motivated by consequences, not by the motive, spirit, or principle of a thing. He refuses to get help, and refuses to change his behavior, until someone else threatens him with consequences. He’ll change when he’s in the trouble, not because he wants to make others happy, but because he wants out of trouble.
Stubborn- He cannot be reasoned with.

Abilities: Sandbending- Hyperion has trained with Sandbenders for 3 years now, at first he learned fairly fast but his learning pace slowed because he is extremely stubborn.
Earthbending- He picked up on Earthbending from his mother, Rosalina, but never got any real practice.
Hand to Hand- He first started fighting to impress Rin. He has been training and sparing with fellow sandbender, Ghashiun.
Free Running- He has always been extremely athletic and he loves to climb, do flips, etc.
Flight- Using the sand, he can lift himself into air for a short period of time.

Height: 5'6.5"
Weight:112 lbs
Eyes/Iris: Red
Hair: Black and White
Skin: Apricot(Peach)

Description: Hyperion wears a red jacket with the number "000" on both shoulders, his jacket ends at his shins. Underneath his jacket he has a black shirt and black pants, he wears black shoes and black fingerless gloves. Hyperion is often seen, with a vase of sand strapped to his back, hovering slightly above the ground using sandbending to hold him up (unless he's free running or just hanging out with Rin). He also is found speaking Latin and saying phrases such as "Fortis evadere potero?" which means "How strong can I get?".

History:
Hyperion was born into a high/middle class family in Gaoling, Earth kingdom. He had a difficult relationship with his father who wouldn't bother to teach him anything and eventually left Gaoling and went to the Fire nation. Hyperion picked up earthbending from his mother, one day Hyperion's mother Rosalina was practicing earthbending in their home courtyard. Hyperion walked into the courtyard to see her practicing, he later tried it himself and found that he too could earthbend.
At the age of 11, Hyperion set out to learn bending elsewhere because he was too stubborn to let his mother train him. He was headed to the Si Wong Desert, on his way there he met Rin. Hyperion didn't know at the time (and still doesn't) that Rin is his half sister. Hyperion convinced her to come learn earthbending with him, when they arrived in the Si Wong they met Sha-Mo, who offered to teach them sandbending. During their first training session, it was discovered that Rin was a Fire bender, not an earthbender. When Hyperion turned 13, him and Rin traveled to Ba Sing Se where they are now.

Full Name: Rin Yoshida Nagakashi/Yuuki

Gender: Female

Age: 12

Element: Fire

Birthplace: Shu Jing

Position: Follower of Hyperion, and a member of a Sandbender tribe

Training: Firebending [Beginner] Hand to Hand [Beginner]

Personality: Girly- Whole-heartedly embraces her femininity, without sacrificing her personality or strength.
Kind- Even if you're her enemy and she knows it, she'll never kill or seriously injure you.
Smart- She has learned from the elders of the Earth Kingdom and read many scrolls that help her in her bending.
Loyal- If she has a friend, she will do anything to stick with him/her.
Shy- She prefers to only talk to and stay with Hyperion.

Abilities: (60 words minimum) What is your character good at? Any weaknesses? Please don't over power yourself. Are you a bender, warrior or civilian. You don't have to be someone who fights, you can simply be a cook in a restaurant in some village or city. Use your imagination.

Appearance:
Height: 4'11"
Weight: 75 lbs
Eyes/Iris: Blue
Hair: Black and White
Skin: Apricot(Peach)

Description: Rin wears a black vest that ends mid stomach. Underneath her vest she has a red shirt and red skirt. She has black socks and red shoes, Her hair ends at her waist and has white streaks in it. On both wrists she has black wristbands with fire nation emblems on them. On the front of her skirt there is also a Fire nation emblem.

Other Items:
Item Name: Backup sand vase
Materials: Vase and sand
Description: Since Hyperion is a sandbender, he already carries a large vase of sand on his back, Rin carries a smaller vase of sand in her bag just in case.

Family:
Mother- Atsuko Yuuki
Father- Tekashi Nagakashi (Deceased)
Uncle- Masaka Yuuki (Deceased)
Grandmother- Aeala Yuuki
Older Brother- Hyperion Nagakashi


History:
Rin was born into a low/middle class family in Shu Jing, Fire Nation. She was raised by her grandmother (Who is a non bender) until she traveled with her cousin, Shujinko, to the Sun Warrior's Ancient City. She watched Shujinko learn fire bending and wanted to do it herself so she returned alone to Shu Jing.
When she arrived in Shu Jing, she was welcomed home by her mother, Atsuko a firebender, and her father(who is shared by her and Hyperion), Tekashi an earthbender. She asked her parents about her ability to bend and they both tried to train her but she couldn't bend at her early age.
At age 9, she set out with her uncle Masaka to the Earth Kingdom. When she and Masaka arrived in the Si Wong Desert, the encountered a group of bandits who her uncle tried to fight off. Her uncle was taken prisoner and she ran towards the Si Wong Rock mistaking it for a building.
After traveling for three days in the dry arid desert, she finally passed out. When she awoke she was being carried by Hyperion towards the Hami tribe territory. She was hostile towards him at first but soon became very attached to him. When Rin first trained with Hyperion and Ghashiun she couldn't bend earth or sand. In a rage she blasted fire into the air from her mouth. Eventually Rin and Hyperion went to Ba Sing Se where they still are.

Sample Rp:
Rin was walking next to Hyperion in the heat of the summer. "Hey, Hyperion... can I ask you something?"

"Sure" he responded.

"Do you think I will ever be able to bend like a master?" she asked him.

Hyperion stops walking, "I think you will."

Rin smiles, "Can you teach me?"

"What?" he asked her.

She looks down and moves the sand with her feet, "I want to learn sandbending, can you teach me?"

Hyperion takes her hand and holds it up to eye level, "But you're a firebender," he says pointing at the fire nation emblem "You can't learn Any type of earthbending."

Corrected
Full Name: Rin Yoshida Nagakashi/Yuuki

Gender: Female

Age: 12

Element: Fire

Birthplace: Shu Jing

Position: Follower of Hyperion, and a member of a Sandbender tribe

Training: Firebending [Beginner] Hand to Hand [Beginner]

Personality: Girly- Whole-heartedly embraces her femininity, without sacrificing her personality or strength.
Kind- Even if you're her enemy and she knows it, she'll never kill or seriously injure you.
Smart- She has learned from the elders of the Earth Kingdom and read many scrolls that help her in her bending.
Loyal- If she has a friend, she will do anything to stick with him/her.
Shy- She prefers to only talk to and stay with Hyperion.

Abilities: Firebending- She was born a firebender, but she never got any real. She recently started soaring with Hyperion, who bought a firebending scroll for her.
Fireball- One of the few moves she has successfully learned, she focuses fire onto a small orb that can be thrown.
Firebreath- Rin learned firebreath before any other technique, while she was first training with the sandbenders she flew into a fit of rage and began blasting fire from her mouth.

Appearance:
Height: 4'11"
Weight: 75 lbs
Eyes/Iris: Blue
Hair: Black and White
Skin: Apricot(Peach)

Description: Rin wears a black vest that ends mid stomach. Underneath her vest she has a red shirt and red skirt. She has black socks and red shoes, Her hair ends at her waist and has white streaks in it. On both wrists she has black wristbands with fire nation emblems on them. On the front of her skirt there is also a Fire nation emblem.

Other Items:
Item Name: Backup sand vase
Materials: Vase and sand
Description: Since Hyperion is a sandbender, he already carries a large vase of sand on his back, Rin carries a smaller vase of sand in her bag just in case.

Family:
Mother- Atsuko Yuuki
Father- Tekashi Nagakashi (Deceased)
Uncle- Masaka Yuuki (Deceased)
Grandmother- Aeala Yuuki
Older Brother- Hyperion Nagakashi


History:
Rin was born into a low/middle class family in Shu Jing, Fire Nation. She was raised by her grandmother (Who is a non bender) until she traveled with her cousin, Shujinko, to the Sun Warrior's Ancient City. She watched Shujinko learn fire bending and wanted to do it herself so she returned alone to Shu Jing.
When she arrived in Shu Jing, she was welcomed home by her mother, Atsuko a firebender, and her father(who is shared by her and Hyperion), Tekashi an earthbender. She asked her parents about her ability to bend and they both tried to train her but she couldn't bend at her early age.
At age 9, she set out with her uncle Masaka to the Earth Kingdom. When she and Masaka arrived in the Si Wong Desert, the encountered a group of bandits who her uncle tried to fight off. Her uncle was taken prisoner and she ran towards the Si Wong Rock mistaking it for a building.
After traveling for three days in the dry arid desert, she finally passed out. When she awoke she was being carried by Hyperion towards the Hami tribe territory. She was hostile towards him at first but soon became very attached to him. When Rin first trained with Hyperion and Ghashiun she couldn't bend earth or sand. In a rage she blasted fire into the air from her mouth. Eventually Rin and Hyperion went to Ba Sing Se where they still are.

Sample Rp:
Rin was walking next to Hyperion in the heat of the summer. "Hey, Hyperion... can I ask you something?"

"Sure" he responded.

"Do you think I will ever be able to bend like a master?" she asked him.

Hyperion stops walking, "I think you will."

Rin smiles, "Can you teach me?"

"What?" he asked her.

She looks down and moves the sand with her feet, "I want to learn sandbending, can you teach me?"

Hyperion takes her hand and holds it up to eye level, "But you're a firebender," he says pointing at the fire nation emblem "You can't learn Any type of earthbending."

Full Name: Hyperion Nagakashi

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Element: Earth

Birthplace: Gaoling

Position: Member of Sandbender tribe

Training: Earthbending [Intermediate] Sandbending [Intermediate] Hand to Hand [Intermediate]

Personality: Fierce- He loves to fight and will do so every chance he gets.
Guardian- He will do everything in his power to protect Rin.
Smart- He doesn't read much as he considers it "boring" but he does like to learn hands-on.
Loyal- If you want to join him he won't leave your side... unless you try to hurt Rin.
Cocky- He loves fighting, and will do it every chance he gets. He presumes that he will be the victor of every fight he gets into.
Destructive- When fighting he will often attempt to destroy everything in his path to take down his opponent.
Childish- He is only motivated by consequences, not by the motive, spirit, or principle of a thing. He refuses to get help, and refuses to change his behavior, until someone else threatens him with consequences. He’ll change when he’s in the trouble, not because he wants to make others happy, but because he wants out of trouble.
Stubborn- He cannot be reasoned with.

Abilities: Sandbending- Hyperion has trained with Sandbenders for 3 years now, at first he learned fairly fast but his learning pace slowed because he is extremely stubborn.
Earthbending- He picked up on Earthbending from his mother, Rosalina, but never got any real practice.
Hand to Hand- He first started fighting to impress Rin. He has been training and sparing with fellow sandbender, Ghashiun.
Free Running- He has always been extremely athletic and he loves to climb, do flips, etc.
Flight- Using the sand, he can lift himself into air for a short period of time.

Height: 5'6.5"
Weight:112 lbs
Eyes/Iris: Red
Hair: Black and White
Skin: Apricot(Peach)

Description: Hyperion wears a red jacket with the number "000" on both shoulders, his jacket ends at his shins. Underneath his jacket he has a black shirt and black pants, he wears black shoes and black fingerless gloves. Hyperion is often seen, with a vase of sand strapped to his back, hovering slightly above the ground using sandbending to hold him up (unless he's free running or just hanging out with Rin). He also is found speaking Latin and saying phrases such as "Fortis evadere potero?" which means "How strong can I get?".

Family:
Mother- Rosalina Nagakashi (Deceased)
Father- Tekashi Nagakashi (Deceased)
Uncle- Yuno Kusaou
Aunt- Sha'Tu Kusaou (Deceased)
Sister- Reiko Nagakashi
Half sister- Rin Nagakashi/Yuuki


History:
Hyperion was born into a high/middle class family in Gaoling, Earth kingdom. He had a difficult relationship with his father who wouldn't bother to teach him anything and eventually left Gaoling and went to the Fire nation. Hyperion picked up earthbending from his mother, one day Hyperion's mother Rosalina was practicing earthbending in their home courtyard. Hyperion walked into the courtyard to see her practicing, he later tried it himself and found that he too could earthbend.
At the age of 11, Hyperion set out to learn bending elsewhere because he was too stubborn to let his mother train him. He was headed to the Si Wong Desert, on his way there he met Rin. Hyperion didn't know at the time (and still doesn't) that Rin is his half sister. Hyperion convinced her to come learn earthbending with him, when they arrived in the Si Wong they met Sha-Mo, who offered to teach them sandbending. During their first training session, it was discovered that Rin was a Fire bender, not an earthbender. When Hyperion turned 13, him and Rin traveled to Ba Sing Se where they are now.

Sample RP:
Rin and Hyperion had finished sparring and were heading inside.
"Go easy on me next time will you..?" Rin asked holding her right arm, ribbing it slowly.
"I'm sorry, please forgive me." Hyperion responds before opening their house door.
Rin entered while he held the door for her, "Thanks..."
"No problem," Hyperion began, "anything for an united friend."
Rin stopped and looked at him "You're the one that did it."
Hyperion closes the door behind him, "What?"
"You injured me during sparring." Rin said before grabbing her vest and throwing it over her shoulder.
"Oh yeah... I'm sorry," Hyperion answered, "I'll let you win next time."
Rin clenched her teeth, "Hyperion I swear I'm going to deck you in the halls."
"But it's the middle of summer..." his childish trait beginning to kick in, "Christmas isn't for another si-"
Rin punched him in the stomach and went into her room.
"Oww..."