Alisa Ogata

Full Name: Alisa Oosawa Ogata
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Element: Air(Aerokinesis)
Birthplace: Eastern air temple
Position: Novice airbender
Training: Airbending [beginner]

Personality: Calm- Alisa is very peaceful, often meditating during her free time.
Courageous- She will go to hell and back to reach a goal, or help out a friend.
Friendly: Alisa loves being around other people, she is even nice to those who aren't nice to her.

Abilities: Airbending/Aerokinesis- Alisa, being born in an air temple, inherited airbending from her parents.

Appearance:
Height: 5"1
Weight: 81 lbs
Eyes: Silver
Hair: Brown/Black
Skin: Peach

Description: Alisa wears basic airbender attire with a black headband. She is almost always smiling because of her protagonist personality. Her hair is longer than most airbenders, ending at her calves, and she often travels using her air scooter.

Weaponry & Other Gear:
Item Name: Glider
Materials: Wood, plastic
Description: Used by airbenders to soar through the sky.

Item Name: Hour Glass
Materials: Glass, sand
Description: Used to tell time.


History: Alisa was born am air nomad. While she was growing up she wasn't good at airbending so she became a non bender until she turned 12.
When Alisa was 8, she traveled with a group of Earth Kingdom merchants to the Earth Kingdom. She became a citizen of Ba Sing Se, after doing so she took many trips to the surrounding cities to trade goods.
When she was 12, an air nomad, Monk Konkuro, came to visit her. When he arrived he gave her an hour glass and offered to train her in the art of airbending.

Full Name: Alisa Oosawa Ogata
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Element: Air(Aerokinesis)
Birthplace: Eastern air temple
Position: Citizen
Training: Airbending [beginner]

Personality: Calm- Alisa is very peaceful, often meditating during her free time.
Courageous- She will go to hell and back to reach a goal, or help out a friend.
Friendly: Alisa loves being around other people, she is even nice to those who
aren't nice to her.

Abilities: Airbending/Aerokinesis- Alisa, being born in an air temple, inherited airbending
from her parents.

Appearance:
Height: 5"1
Weight: 81 lbs
Eyes: Silver
Hair: Brown/Black
Skin: Peach

Description: Alisa wears basic airbender attire with a black headband. She is
almost always smiling because of her protagonist personality. Her hair is
longer than most airbenders, ending at her calves, and she often travels using
her air scooter.

Weaponry & Other Gear:
Item Name: Glider
Materials: Wood, plastic
Description: Used by airbenders to soar through the sky.

Item Name: Hour Glass
Materials: Glass, sand
Description: Used to tell time.

History: Alisa was born am air nomad. While she was growing up she wasn't
good at airbending so she became a non bender until she turned 12.
When Alisa was 8, she traveled with a group of Earth Kingdom merchants to
the Earth Kingdom. She became a citizen of Ba Sing Se, after doing so she
took many trips to the surrounding cities to trade goods.
When she was 12, an air nomad, Monk Konkuro, came to visit her. When he
arrived he gave her an hour glass and offered to train her in the art of
airbending.

Sample rp:
Alisa has been air scooting around Ba Sing Se for hours now and is becoming bored at an increasing rate. She sighs before running into a breach. She stays on the ground gripping her stomach, "...fail..." she says to herself while she's getting up. She stops halfway up when she feels a sharp pain in her left leg. She bites her lip to keep from whimpering aloud, tears start to fall as she continues to stand.
Alisa begins limping toward her house trying to look okay. Finally, she reaches her house. She goes inside slowly shutting the door after herself, then cries quietly while applying first aid. When the pain recedes, Alisa grabs her glider and heads back outside

okay so the first thing I notice is that the profile word counts are all much too small. fix that and try again.

eh, nevermind.
REJECTED!