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PostSubject: Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE   Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE EmptyMon Jun 11, 2012 9:50 pm

Full Name: Dood Brenger
Gender: Unknown
Age: about 30,000 years
Element: none
Birthplace: Unknown
Position: Spirit

Personality: Dood is a vile, evil creature from hell. He tends to be a very sadistic if he ever gets the chance to torture those that he takes to hell. He tends to be very robust about getting his job done, and very excitable about getting it done right. He is absolutely enraged by the site of his immortal foe, Zayon.

Abilities: He is in charge of bringing those who have committed crime against humanity to hell. He is also the one responsible for introducing sin to the world, he also started several wars just so that he could gain new souls to take. He also has the ability to change his appearance at will, and the ability to grant power. Not enough power to destroy the world or blow apart mountains, but enough to allow one to take on armies.

Appearance: It has many forms. It generally appears before mortals as a 12'7 monster that stands on its hind legs, and interacts with its environment with at least three of this forms twenty arms. It has a large tail, ceder like in appearance. Its body is covered in scales, which are blood red. It has large spines running down its back, that are as black as ebony. It's claws and face are as white as snow.


History: At the dawn of creation, the three celestial entities created the world. After it was created, they saw Dood speaking to man. Dood was filling man's head with visions of power, greed, and sin. After seeing this, the celestial entities separated the spirits from man, thus creating the Spirit World. After several hundred years, the celestial entities saw that man's souls were no longer deserving of dining with them in the hall of knowledge, so they created a place for those of man that wished others harm and who did deceitful things. They appointed Dood the task of taking those that were wrong to the place of torture and punishment, Hell. They put him to this task seeing that it was a fit punishment for causing these problems. What they did not expect, was that he would love his new job and that he wanted to get more and more souls to take. So much so, that he found a way to become physical in the world of the living, and to where he would begin whispering into the ears of men about the glory of conquest and the spoils that could be gained from war. As such, he is the reason that war ever started. Dood then continued his job, collecting soul after soul after soul, and then tossing them all into the pit of Hell. After a while, he became too much for the celestial entities to ignore, they ordered Avatar Zayon to deal with him, gifting him with Energybending. After a long and fierce battle, Zayon stood victorious, and Dood was left unable to to return to the world of the living as a physical presence. One of the celestial entities decided to remain in the world of the living as a giant lion turtle to ensure that any Avatar that required Energybending would receive it. After a thousand years, Dood has returned to the world of the living as a physical being. And he wants more souls.


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PostSubject: Re: Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE   Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE EmptyMon Jun 25, 2012 10:50 pm

I was hoping that people would either approve or reject the revamped.
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PostSubject: Re: Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE   Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE EmptyMon Jun 25, 2012 10:52 pm

Hmm...well, I don't know about the celestial beings stuff, or Hell. I'm pretty sure that the Avatar world believes in neither....
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PostSubject: Re: Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE   Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE EmptyWed Jul 11, 2012 11:49 pm

I've got to agree with Nokomi on this one. it's just a bit too... out there.
but it seems it somehow got accepted anyways. *shrugs*
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PostSubject: Re: Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE   Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE EmptyFri Jul 13, 2012 10:11 pm

Sorry, Gysu, but on the grounds that your profile completely defies the lore of Avatar: The Last Airbender, I'm afraid it's my duty to Reject your Revamp of Dood Brenger. I preferred his original, which is quite the statement.

Once again, sorry; this time for the belated reply.
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PostSubject: Re: Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE   Dood Brenger Reimagined DONE EmptySat Jul 14, 2012 8:33 am

Eh, this was really something done to appease Meili.
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