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| Subject: Luki Natoree Thu Dec 20, 2012 7:08 pm | |
| Full Name: Luki Natore (pronounced Lu-kee Na-tor-ee)
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Element: None
Birthplace: Ba Sing Se
Position: Street Rat
Training: Wrestling, Brawling
Personality: Luki is a generally nice guy, but the harsh world of an orphan has forced him to survive at all costs. Luki resorts to violence if need be, but usually tries to talk his way out of things. He does what it takes to survive; stealing food, running from guards, etc. Luki always dreams of what life would be like should he have been a normal boy. He is a very romantic person when it comes to girls, and wants nothing more than someone to protect and care for, but no one seems to like a beggar.
Abilities: Being a street rat, Luki has had to adapt to the rough lifestyle, enabling him to get plenty of practice fighting with other boys and participating in the local wrestling tournaments. Although he may not look it, Luki has a good sense of logic, and can tell right from wrong. He is quick in a fight, and his brawn is a positive factor when fighting. He also has experience with blacksmithing, as he sometimes gets hired on part time at the local blacksmith.
Appearance: Luki is somewhat short, and brawny. His hair is shaggy, and his face is profiled and full.
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 145 lbs.
Eyes: Dark Blue
Hair: Dirty Blonde
Weaponry and other items: Luki carries nothing but a small dagger he found in a river, and wears a blue cloth band around his head. On his chest, he wears a loose tan tunic with a belt ties around his waist, and black kung-fu pants on his legs. He wears traditional boots on his feet.
History: As a child of 8, Luki's parents we're killed in a house fire. When the guards found him in the smoldering wreckage, they took him to the orphanage, but the orphanage was overfilling with children, due to the city's poor attention to the orphan situation. The guards left him there with no further questions, and Luki slipped away during the commotion. After a year of wandering around the streets, scrounging food, and sleeping under bridges, Luki found refuge with a gang of fellow street boys. Luki stayed with this group for four years, and left whenever the gang started to hurt innocent people and take their belongings. Since then, Luki has made his home in an abandoned, partially burned shack in the slums of Ba Sing Se. When he was thirteen, Luki was in desperate need of money. So when he heard of a friendly wrestling tournament going on between some fellow poor kids (a reward of 10 coins), he decided to try his luck, and emerged victorious. Since then, Luki has made a living out of amateur underground wrestling tournaments. |
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| Subject: No go, bozo. But really, redo this, please. Sat Dec 22, 2012 3:10 am | |
| Please follow the pertinent template found Here
At present, the problem is mainly as such: In your Training section, you did not include the tier of skill for each ability listed. This makes staff unable to appropriately judge your application.
However, your current template lines up with that of a Beginner-Tier Non-Bender.
Thank you, and bump this topic when you've made the appropriate changes to your application.
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